Comments to specific stories are usually included at the end of the story itself; I also receive a fair number of general comments, unrelated to specific stories. Rather than responding to them all privately in email, this page is devoted to posting, and possibly responding to, comments from readers that are of a general nature. If you send me a general comment and hope to see a reply, please come here and I will try to update it as often as possible.
|Anonymous||3/28/2017||Love your writing style.Love to see a story set in a future where child erotica's legal.A magazine openly sold dedicated to girls between 7 and 11.centrefold girls open legged spreading their vaginas and but cheeks.Magazines could be titled tiny pussies.parents clamouring to get their girls fame|
|A fine story idea!
|MooseBreath||3/29/2017||please get rid of that fucking disappearing/re-apperaing gray bar at the top of the screen!!!!!!!!!
If I need the info/links, I will hit the [home] key. it covers too much of what i'm trying to read/see. the fact that it is transient is too disconcerting and makes me leave without reading.
|I'm really sorry you're having trouble with the site, Moose. I'd love to know what browser you are using (make and version ##s), and the device you're using. I do not have the problem you are describing, and I try to test out the site on most modern browsers. If anyone else is having the problems that Moose is describing, pleasepleaseplease send me a comment. I'd love to know.
FYI, the site is designed with handheld devices in mind (on the theory that most people are reading erotica on handhelds these days). The bar I implement is a standard implementation on lots of mobile-ready web pages. Moose, do you have trouble with other web sites, too?
Good luck, and let me know how it goes. Definitely if I get more feedback that the site isn't working correctly for lots of readers, I will change it. On the other hand I get around five million hits a year and this is maybe the second comment I've gotten like this, so I think the problem is pretty small. But we shall see!
|Oh, man, I haven't forgotten, I swear. I will finish the tale, I must finish the tale, and I can't wait to finish the tale. Please keep coming back? Please?
|Marty||3/28/2017||I read the comments from your readers and agree your stories are great. I have masturbated to your stories many times. Entered into a fantasy world of acts i wouldnt do in reality.|
|Thanks so much, Marty. Fantasy is great, isn't it? That's what erotic fiction is all about.
|Anonymous||2/16/2017||I saw this movie years ago the name was Fire|
|I have no idea what you're talking about, Anon, but thanks for the comment! :)
Your stories are absolutely amazing. It's really so hard to find erotic stories showcasing young girls and older men that are actually written well. It's one of my favorite things to fantasize about but so hard to find. I'm a voice actor for hentai and the like so I'm surrounded by a lot of erotica. Visuals and audio doesn't get me going like a great fleshed out story! Sorry for going on and on.
Thank you! I look forward to reading many more of your stories!
|And thank you for the kind comment, Kelsey. Hentai voice actor! That's awfully cool! I hope you find other stories you like around here.
|Liz Smith||1/1/2017||I wanted to let you know that I really enjoy your stories. I especially love ones with incest and young pregnancies. Please keep up the good work, and thank you.|
|writerz0||11/24/2016||Love all the stories here. So many lovely, sexy budding flowers to pick. Thanks for sharing.|
|Nepi||11/9/206||Hi. I really enjoy your hot stories. I was wondering if you could write any baby or toddler erotica. I have been to the Nepi Stories Collection already, but there have been no updates in nearly two months. Maybe one of the guest authors could write about little ones still in diapers.|
|Thanks for the comment, Nepi. I'm afraid I do not do baby or toddler stories and also usually instruct my guest authors, when asked, that I won't publish their stories along these lines either. I hope you'll keep reading and enjoying what we do here, though, and can find what you're looking for from other sites.
|Ophelia's Fever||11/6/2016||I am a new author on the asstr site, and I think you are one of the best writers on there. I love your creative imagination as well as the careful plotting you do in your stories. So prolific! You are certainly someone I admire in the scene.
If you care to check out my work, you can find me here: http://awe-kyle.ru/files/Authors/Ophelia_Fever/
Have a great day!
|Thanks for the link, Ophelia, you're a wonderful writer yourself. Readers, do check out Ophelia's stories and in particular her poems.
|Anonymous||9/12/2016||A friend of mine would like to share her story as a rape survivor and she really thinks you could do the horror of her experience and the love and growth of her recovery justice. Please let me know if you would be interested|
|Wow, what a tremendous compliment to be considered for such an effort. I'd be proud to do what I can. You didn't leave a contact email so I hope you check my comments column; feel free to send me another comment with email included and I will contact you directly.
|Anonymous||8/11/2016||Just found your site. Have you ever thought of listing stories by general subject matter? Like interracial sex, or swinger stories?|
|Thanks for the feedback, Anon. I actually did this, to a certain extent, in the past, and found it difficult to categorize and maintain it all. As part of an effort to ease the process for posting stories, I eliminated that aspect of it.
||Hello! Write a story about love and sex
knowledge of girls 8-10 years old. Thank you!
||Thanks for the suggestion, Rubi... Although it lacks detail to be an actual "story request." I think most of my stories fall into this description, more or less, so check out my stories!
||I have been a fan of your stories ever since you were "Chris Jorgensen." I
remember "Masturbation Assistant" being the first one that really set you apart in
my mind as an incredibly gifted writer with a wonderful knack for storytelling.
Since then I have faithfully looked forward to your next creation, and you never
disappoint! I just wanted you to know how much I appreciate your artistry, and I
look forward to enjoying your stories well into the future. Thanks!
||Thank you for the comment and for coming off "lurker mode" long enough to leave it! Glad you like what you've read, and I hope I can continue to produce stuff you like, even though my output has fallen off some of late. Cheers!
||I have read a few of your stories and find them enjoyable and well written I love reading incest stories .
||As I read through your non-story related comments, I saw a question
about phone browser issues. I use Firefox on my iPhone4, and I have no
trouble with site formatting issues (as of yet). I would suggest that.
I use my phone for a start to my morning story that gets the blood and
the semen flowing. Your site, while not exclusively, is a part of this
As many have commented, Loliwood is missed. I remember Arin asking many times for help in proofing stories that had been submitted, but I did not have a lot of time to do so. I am glad that the archives are still available (with the exception of Renpet's, which have been removed from Loliwood, but are on ASSTR).
When I have a moment or two of free-time, I do write pedo stories involving men with prepubescent girls. I have tried to get them published on ASSTR, but I cannot ever get a response from anyone. I don't write often enough to make it something that I believe people will appreciate, so I have not contacted anyone else in regards to posting with them. So, I write what I can when I can, and I archive them until I have the time to post regularly.
Thanks again for your site. It has definitely helped me keep my sanity. Keep up the good work!
|I'm glad to be a part of your "morning ritual" and to help you keep your sanity. That is what it's all about, isn't it? Hopefully the browser issues have been resolved by now. There shouldn't be any problem with the site I don't think. If you're trying to get in touch with the ASSTR admins, I'll tell you that I've never once received a reply from the admins. If you need help setting up your own site, I can provide some, or if you want to publish something here on my site, give me a holler. I've been working on improving my posting process so that guest authors should be easier to accommodate--but I don't do any editing. That's too much work I'm afraid.
||Female that loves this site
I just found this site and I am go thankful I did. I have had so many pussy melting orgasms from these sexy stories. I love perverted pdo stories, they make me cream like nothing else. My favorite kind or scenarios are when a woman confesses to her husband/boyfriend that daddy used to play with her and she relives it while fucking her husband. Makes my pussy so creamy.
|I'm awfully glad you found this site too, Pervertedgirl!
||You're a fantastic author and I like your stories so far, especially the amount of cum in it. I'll try to read for of your stories soon, now I'm a bit exhausted, if you know what I mean.
|I'm glad you found my site, CreamGirl. And I do like your nickname! Keep the comments coming, they are appreciated.
||This is a great site. Ever since Loliwood went down, this site
became must read for the fans. Also you have some great author post in your site. Make it more fun to come to your site.
I have to say thank you for your awsome job.
One suggestion: there is one author name corn53 also write similar story. We haven't seen his new story recently. If you can get him to post stories on your site that will be great. Thank again for great job.
|Thanks so much for the very high compliment, Lucy. I miss Loliwood a lot and I hope that my site can be something of a pale comparison to that great place.
I've not heard of corn53 but I'll look into him/her!
||Hello again, been working through your stories and some of your guests! All absolutely fantastic, so glad I dropped on you / them after lolliwood shut down! Please keep up the good work. If there are any more links you could send me I would be grateful.
|Glad you liked them, chef!
||Illg from asstr is really good check that b out
||Thanks, lilgirllover, for the recommendation. Which reminds me, I need to create a "links" page where I link to all my favorite writers and related web sites. Someday, someday!
illg's web site is here: http://awe-kyle.ru/~illg/
And lilgirllover also has stories on ASSTR at http://awe-kyle.ru/files/Authors/Little/
These stories are just dynamite!
||I have only read a few stories so far and I am impressed with the ease
with you tell a sexy story and the content of the stories I have read.
||Very glad you like them, Kia, and Prurient!
I wanted you to know how "helpful" your stories are to me. I know I have read the Lady of Sins Lazy Saturday story alot and it has helped me feel so good cause I totally relate it to my situation with my daughter. Thank you so much
|Thank you so much for the feedback. I am a big fan of Lady of Sin myself! She's one of my favorite erotic writers and a sweet woman as well.
||First off, thank you for writing some GREAT stories, I've read about
half of them and they are great, I like how you mix in some fairly
rough stuff in the mix, as I do enjoy those as well on occasion, so
you have a perfect mix!!
I was also wondering if you happened to know whats going on with l-wood studios, why they have closed up shop? I got concerned when i noticed "The End" months ago and couldnt find any info on what happened and all the contact forms no longer work :/. I just wish i could copy that portion of asstr in case someone does something crazy like delete all of LS!
|Hi am! Thanks so much for your kind words! Sadly I have no further info about the closing of Loliwood. I was out of the country and when I logged in it was closed, and the bulletin board was closed, and that's all the info I've ever got. Someone on a chat board on Kirsten's Collection pondered if it was related to a teacher in the Philippines who was fired after using his work email to post comments on Loliwood, but that doesn't seem too likely.
My personal opinion is that Arin (the web master) just got overwhelmed as the site increased in popularity and bozos like me kept posting lots and lots of stories. But it was so abrupt, I'm not sure I think that explains it.
If anyone reading this has any specific information about what happened to Loliwood, I and many of my readers would love to know the story. Also if you know Arin, or if you are Arin, I just want you to know how thankful I am for your hard work on that site. Loved it for many years. Many, many thanks, and enjoy your well-earned time off!
||Have you ever thought about adding a little bit more than just your articles? I mean, what you say is important and everything. However imagine if you added some great images or videos to give your posts more, "pop"! Your content is excellent but with pics and video clips, this site could undeniably be one of the best in its field. Excellent blog!
||Interesting, Rowena. Personally I find pictures and other items a little distracting in stories that I am reading. I find my mind wanders to the picture rather than reading the story, and I don't really like that experience. Furthermore, all pictures, etc., I'd find on the web would presumably be copyrighted and if I want people to respect my copyright I ought to respect theirs as well. So unless you know of a good open source batch of lolicon drawings, I think we'll have to stick with plan text.
||! Quick question that's entirely off topic. Do you know how to make your site mobile friendly? My weblog looks weird when browsing from my iphone 4. I'm trying to find a template or plugin that might be able to fix this issue. If you have any suggestions, please share. Thanks!
||So does my stuff look good on your iPhone 4? I generally use my iPhone 5, and it looks OK, but I have found that different browsers behave very differently on the iPhone. Lately I've been using the Atomic browser (the free version). I like it a lot (although it has a tendency to crash a lot).
I have struggled with getting my site to look good on mobile devices. I'm not sure if I've succeeded at all. All I've done is just home-spin HTML, nothing fancy at all. The only advice I would give would be to use tables to size the text columns, which seems to work best. If you like how my stuff looks, feel free to view the source and copy at will.
If anyone else has feedback or advice on how to design web pages like this for mobile, please leave a comment, many people including myself are amateurishly struggling with the issue.
||What's up to all, how is the whole thing, I think every one is getting more from this site, and your views are nice in favor of new viewers.
||Thanks so much, Emile. Danke.
Sorry it took so long to respond. I just wanted to thank you for emailing me back, I have tried emailing a couple other authors before and never got any responses :/. Speaking of which there is a nitch of stories i really like that i have not found many fitting it, and i have spent far to much time looking, lol. One of my favorite all time stories actually had a male on the receiving end (which I almost never read read and until this one never found.... appealing), I was wondering if you knew of any stories/authors that have similar theme (the similar parent involvment/reluctance) only with a female as the main character. The author/stories that i mention above are on asstr under files/Authors/Julie_Damom/, they are great reads!
|Thanks for the suggestion about Julie Damom's stories. I read one of them, and it was pretty fascinating although as you mention, it isn't the sort of thing I normally read. But it was very hot and well-done anyway.
I don't know of any other writers doing the same thing with the gender roles reversed, although I imagine they are out there. Anyone have any suggestions? Meanwhile my mind is churning through a similar plot-line.
I really enjoyed most all of your stories, especially of "young" girls
having sex with older men, 1.e. rape and by a black man with a large
cock. Also, is there another site where I can read the same kind of
stories by you such as child sex stories. I look forward to hear from
|I think if you poke around asstr enough you will find similar stuff. If you haven't read Renpet's stories, I'd start there, he is a master. And the now-suspended site Loliwood Studios is still browsable and many of the stories in that archive are excellent.
Anyone else have suggestions?
|Reply from another Ron:
One of my favorite places is within ASSTR, it's Kristen Archives. Just look in the collections section on the left side of the ASSTR main page. You can find stories sorted by type so that whatever your interest, you can find what you're looking for; and they're all well-documented with codes to help you with fine tuning your selection.
|Great suggestion, Second Ron. Thanks for the reminder about Kristen's Archives.
||Hi, i think that i saw you visited my blog thus i came to _return the favor_.I am attempting to find things to enhance my website!I suppose its ok to use a few of your ideas!!
||Not sure what blog you are talking about, kian. Give me a link-back and I'll be able to check it out. Meanwhile, feel free to steal design ideas from me if you wish, I probably stole them from someone else anyway! Not that I think what I've done is anything worth stealing... All of my content is copyrighted, but feel free to copy anything you'd like from the design.
||Great goods from you, man. I've understand your stuff previous to and you are just extremely wonderful. I really like what you've acquired here, certainly like what you are stating and the way in which you say it. You make it enjoyable and you still take care of to keep it smart. I can not wait to read far more from you. This is actually a wonderful site.
||--blush-- You are too kind, Kimberley. But I'm really glad you like it.
Have you considered re-posting these stories on here as they are no longer accessible on Loliwood
|Hmm. I have no problem accessing them. Let me know if you still do. I do want to migrate them over here and will do so as soon as I get a chance, but if you still have a problem accessing them I'll try to get them over quicker.
Anyone else have a problem accessing the Loliwood Studios stories?
||I have read each of your stories now I have no idea how many times.
Well told. Well written. Just awesome story telling all the way
||I would love to see more stories involving adult males and underage
females that actually are love stories with happy endings. My
favorite kind is uncle - niece stories where they live happily ever
after together. A 15 to 20 year age difference is not all that un-
realistic in real life.
||Every weekend i pay a quick visit this web site, as i want enjoyment, as this this web site contains really pleasant funny material too.
||Barron of Ideas
||Army and Air Force officers in grades 7 and higher are referred to
as "Generals". (Grade 1 is Second Lieutenant and grade 6 is Coronel). The navy and coast guard use a separate system of titles where grade
1 is ensign and grade 6 is Captain. in their system grades 7 and
higher are flag officers. Although part of the Navy, the Marines use
the Army system for officers.
Generals are sensitive about things said about them. You need to be careful that your General comments are favorable or you may be put on KP (kitchen police). Or an even more unfavorable duty.
As this is a sex site you would think that there would be more Generals in stories. One reason there isn't is the sensitive nature of Generals, they hate to be compared to someone with human feelings. Without human feelings the story is well, beastiality. Rache could handle those kinds of stories but she preferred stories about females and there aren't a lot of female Generals.
Do you suppose this site would be interested in Admiral comments?
|I'm not sure about Admiral comments, but admirable comments are certainly welcome. Your pun-infested comment, however, is groan-worthy. Generally speaking of course. ;-p
||I think the admin of this website is in fact working hard in favor of his web site, because here every material is quality based data.
||I'm a writer myself, and often find myself being hyper-critical of the works of others.
Your stories need no criticism at all, except for positive criticism.
They are all very well written, not too full of flowery prose and they are HOT.
Thank you for the entertainment.
||Thanks, Phil. I looked on asstr for your stories and didn't see anything. Do drop us a link!
||I have to tell you i read your stories for the first time and I am
really fascinated specially with those related to incest, girls and
boys. I personally had an incest experience very young and i loved it
each moment, so when i grew up I always turned on with this kind of
stuff. I really like the way you write. Please keep writing!
||Hey Chris. I really enjoy reading your stories. They make me hard reading them. I am 57 and never had a young encounter before so I have them through your stories. Keep up the good work. Do you have any stories with illustrations? I would like to see that. If not that is ok too Thanks
||Thanks, bear. I'm not sure about stories with illustrations; I don't want to violate others' copyrights and I don't have a good source of non-copyrighted illustrations so I'm not sure whether I will post anything like this. But, keep coming back, maybe some day I will pull it off!
||More Kelsie! :)
||I've always been meaning to keep going on the Kelsie stories but I haven't gotten back to it. I'll try, I promise. So many stories, so little time! :)
||Check Out Story Guy on ASSTR
One of my favorite Authors on ASSTR is Story Guy. He's usually got an underage thing going ion and almost always involves first time anal. He is constantly looking for co-authors or ideas. You both seem to have a similar style in story lines, though Story Guy's stories are always in multi-parts.
\Check him out, I like your concise style, but sometimes thirst for more!
|Cool, thanks for the suggestion, Anon! I definitely remember reading some stories by him in the past, good to see he is writing again and I will read further. Others here should check him out too if they haven't already.
do you know what happened to loliwood? I loved that site and was very sad to see it go...
|Alas I do not know what happened (see a post above for further commentary on my part). I just hope that someday the webmaster Arin will stumble upon this site and drop me a line, would love to hear from him/her, just to say "hi" and "thanks."
I was wondering if you could tell me why Loliwood Studios has been suspended.
|Sorry, I don't know anything about it (see my comments above on the topic). Again if anyone knows anything give me a comment.
||Hello! Do you know if they make any plugins to safeguard against hackers? I'm kinda paranoid about losing everything I've worked hard on. Any suggestions?
||Hello Trish, thanks for the comment. Do you have stories here on ASSTR? I couldn't find anything under the name you entered. If you do, please send me a link, I'd love to read your stuff.
As to your specific question, it depends in part on what you are concerned about. If you are concerned about your ASSTR account getting hacked, I don't think there's much you can do about it. Basically all that protects your ASSTR account from hackers is your password (apart from whatever safeguards the ASSTR admins have in place, which I know nothing about). So the best thing you can do to protect your ASSTR account is to make sure your password is sufficiently complex, and change it regularly.
The most important thing you can do to protect your ASSTR account is to back up your files. This is important not just because of hackers, but also just because of accidental corruption and server crashes at ASSTR. If you're worried about someone at home finding your backup, then zip it up using a password, give the zip file an innocuous name, and put it on an SD card or something like that!
If your question is about your local computer (rather than your ASSTR account) being hacked, definitely set up a firewall and run your usual virus protection stuff. That's the best I can offer you as far as advice.
Sorry, that's the best I can offer.
||Hey, just wanted to say I really like your work! I had no idea that you were the author of "Maggie the Little Punker," which is a fave of mine from way back. Thanks for all the great stuff, and have a terrific day!
How cool that you knew "Maggie the Little Punker" from way back when it was first published. That must be like at least 10 years ago! Nice to know it was even noticed, let alone appreciated.
||Lovevyr storeys and those in lolywood storirs to love the way u write and keep good work up Pity lollyeood stories were suspended loved that sight to who created that site love to thank them wish would reopen
||Thank you for updating your FTP area. With the front page lists of recent stories and recent authors broken, I still can look at the parent to the author FTP folders and sort by modified date, so still can scan
for new stories in this area.
||You're welcome, Steve! I like to keep the ftp site open and available, if possible Call me old fashioned if you want!
I commend you on your writing prowess sir. It's a shame that Loliwood Studios shut down, if anyone knows another site like it I'd appreciate a link. I've read numerous stories by your pseudonym, I particularly enjoyed the series about Cindy. Thanks for the literature; I hope it's a labor of love for you.
|I'm honored by your words, Auryx. The Cindy stories are among my favorites, too. And it's definitely a labor of love!
||When you write erotic fiction, do you base your characters on someone?
||It really depends entirely on which story you are talking about. Very often, yes. Some of my stories are true (more or less). Sometimes br
little incidents in my life strike as a good start for an erotic story, and so, while they are not true, they are based in part on real people and events. And sometimes they are pure fantasy with no basis at all in real events or people.
||How come updates vanish then reappear and story links vanish and
reappear later? For example I'll open a brand new story link and bam
'not found' page. Or even say I ope/tdn it and it works fine, I'll
accidently close the tab and when I reopen it, story not found and the
whole update is missing!? I've noticed this very very consistently,
again today it was annoying enough to mention it. The stories are good||There's something wrong with the current caching mechanism on the server. I found that giving the web page several refreshes forces the cache to serve the correct file at some point. Also I've noticed that the problem seems to go away after the file has been up for a couple of days.
||Uncle Bob and Margo
||Fiction vs Real forbidden sex
comments = Chris, Margo & I just love this site! Thank you so much. In one of your comments above, you wrote: "Very often, yes. Some of my stories are true"! We know (or at least we tbrhink) that all stories must have a disclaimer that the story is entirely fiction for legal reasons. However, what excites us about any "adult/child" stories are ones that are true stories of an adult male or couple success/td fully seducin/tdg a shy, but quite willing young girl ( 7 to 12 ) into awesome, delicious sex with him, her or them!
Could you add another "code" such as 'true' or something else that the writer could use to confess to the reader that the story is based upon an actual experience, in spite of the required disclaimer? Absolutely nothing excites us more than reenacting and bringing to life a store a story of such delicious sex that WE KNOW actually happened ... unless that might be living out an actual encounter together or watching the other introducing a young girl to awesome, wonderful joys of forbidden sex.
Very best regards, Bob & Margo
|Thanks, Bob and Margo. Sorry, I did not mean to imply that any of my stories involving sex with minors are true. They are all fictional.
||I absolutely love your stories and have fun at least 10 times. I'm a women who just can't get enough. Are there more?
||Awfully pleased you find the site fulfilling, bthr4. The only other place I have stories posted is at Loliwood, as linked above. But keep coming back here! I try to write a lot, as do my guest authors.
||"Chris" love your stories can't wait for
the next one. Thanks.
Have read every one of them. Sometimes twice. Would love more!
|Glad you like them! There will be more--lots more. Keep checking back!
||ur stories are A okay, in text form, stdo i can enlarge the story as my eye sight is failing.
||Glad to hear the stories in text format are useful for you, Chuck. And thanks for the feedback!
||Hi..I really salute n admire you for your idea of weaving such beautiful stories. I get
mesmerized n just get lost while reading your wonderful stories. It takes out the
stress out of my life...absolutely best among the best..keep it up
||Wow, thanks so much for the kind words, "allways," a/thbriannd I'm so glad you enjoy them.
||Thank you for having this site with these great stories.
||Chris, I've read every single one of your stories at least 2-5 times, including your guest
author's stories, too. I check your website every other day to see if I can find any new
updates. Not only do you have good taste in the type of stories you have on your website
but your stories you write yourself are my favourites out of all of them! Thanks for all the
work you've been putting in :) helps me every night!
||Wow, thanks so much for the kind words, Jess. I'm glad you enjoy the site... especially at night! :)
I look forward to comments from readers. Please provide some feedback on my stories! Thanks. If you leave your email address, it will be kept in strict confidence; I won't publish it online unless you want me to.
Also, if you like a story on my site, you should consider posting a . Share the love! You will be asked for the URL to the story, so make sure you copy that before following the link.
|(Please note that I reserve the right to publish comments on my web site at my discretion.)|